Talk:A Room with No View/GA1
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Reviewer: Crisco 1492 (talk · contribs) 08:48, 3 November 2012 (UTC)
- I'll take this! — Crisco 1492 (talk) 08:48, 3 November 2012 (UTC)
Checklist[edit]
Rate | Attribute | Review Comment |
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1. Well-written: | ||
1a. the prose is clear, concise, and understandable to an appropriately broad audience; spelling and grammar are correct. | See below | |
1b. it complies with the Manual of Style guidelines for lead sections, layout, words to watch, fiction, and list incorporation. | ||
2. Verifiable with no original research: | ||
2a. it contains a list of all references (sources of information), presented in accordance with the layout style guideline. | Fine | |
2b. reliable sources are cited inline. All content that could reasonably be challenged, except for plot summaries and that which summarizes cited content elsewhere in the article, must be cited no later than the end of the paragraph (or line if the content is not in prose). | Fine | |
2c. it contains no original research. | Fine | |
3. Broad in its coverage: | ||
3a. it addresses the main aspects of the topic. | ||
3b. it stays focused on the topic without going into unnecessary detail (see summary style). | ||
4. Neutral: it represents viewpoints fairly and without editorial bias, giving due weight to each. | Good | |
5. Stable: it does not change significantly from day to day because of an ongoing edit war or content dispute. | Per definition | |
6. Illustrated, if possible, by media such as images, video, or audio: | ||
6a. media are tagged with their copyright statuses, and valid non-free use rationales are provided for non-free content. | Fine | |
6b. media are relevant to the topic, and have suitable captions. | Fine | |
7. Overall assessment. | Pending |
Discussion[edit]
- 1
- ""A Room With No View" featured an appearance by recurring guest star Sarah-Jane Redmond." - You discuss a returning villain in the second paragraph. Anything to do with Redmond?
- Why nothing about the production in the lede?
- Who plays Gordon?
- tells him she loves him. - Tells Bryce or the unnamed man?
- comforted - Is this right? Or does she confront him?
- The episode was the first to have been written by producer Ken Horton, and his only solo writing credit. - Which episode?
- Redmond, admittedly a fan of Carter and recurring series director David Nutter, had initially auditioned for another episode of the first season - You didn't mention Chris Carter yet, so Carter comes out of nowhere. Don't forget his role in the episode.
- I copyedited, be sure to check.
- 3
- Nothing whatsoever about themes?
- Spotchecks turn up no issues. — Crisco 1492 (talk) 09:06, 3 November 2012 (UTC)
Further discussion[edit]
- On hold to fix issues indicated above. — Crisco 1492 (talk) 09:06, 3 November 2012 (UTC)
- Alright, looks peachy. Passing. — Crisco 1492 (talk) 22:58, 3 November 2012 (UTC)